General Feedback on my Preliminary Task

As well as asking my media class for feedback on my preliminary task, I also asked for feedback of my friends and family. Their feedback wasn't as detailed but they still made some solid points and gave me some new suggestions and ideas to help me improve. I think it's important to get the advice from people who aren't experts as the majority of people watching my documentary won't be media students or in the film industry.

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